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To see the waters glisten

To see the waters glisten,
and to hear the waves, just listen.
The calming of my heart,
I can't be far apart,
from the water.

A place I hold near,
for it is very dear.
It takes away my fear,
and everything is clear.

I wish I could live there,
and smell the salty air.
I'd wake up with the sun,
before the day's begun,
and swim, for it is fun.

The mist brushing upon my face,
feels as gentle as lace.
Astonished by it's grace,
the water rushing in no race,
my mind goes into space.

The waters gentle touch,
the singing of gulls,
the warmth of the sun,
the rush of the waves,
is where my heart belongs.

Author notes

I love the water. It is calming and beautiful.
"a rose of any color and bright blue daisies" (for contest)

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  • Antebellum
    November 13

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    The mist brushing upon my face,
    feels as gentle as lace.
    Astonished by it's grace,
    the water rushing in no race,
    my mind goes into space.
    ...
    I really like this stanza.
    such a beautiful write.beautiful imagery.
    thansk for entering


  • Slick99
    March 13

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    this is beautiful

    this is awesome/beautiful!!! this is such a soothing poem about the beach!!! i love, love, love it! thanks for sharing!!!


  • Midnight Breeze
    February 27
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    This is absolutely beautiful!!! I as well love water. The beach is a 5 min. walk from my house, I live in the keys. Very well written and rhymed. "the mist brushing upon my face, feels as gentle as lace", very beautiful!!! Thanks for sharing, I look forward to reading more from you!!!!


  • x White Tiger x
    January 20
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    I don't really like water but you make it seem so much nicer than I've learned in my life.


  • JustFallingApart
    January 19

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    I appologize for not being very clear. It's suposed to be word for word a rose of any color and bright blue daisys. nice write, best of luck and hope all is well and thank you for entering

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    January 16

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    Yes the water is just beautiful. I love to be near the ocean. Well done, my friend. I like this poem very much. Brian

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