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One Day




Dearest God,


Tonight an angel graced your garden
It happened so fast with lots of confusion.
I never had the chance to say goodbye
or hold her close, hold her hand

But you needed my child to be with you
to help tend the spirits and make them new.


But  I'm numb from the dread of my heart
not telling her what I need to say,

 of being apart
so please tell my child my very words
and hold her close may it not hurt..

Tell her we love her very being
and I'm finding it hard to find a reason,
And If could I would be with her
In heavens gardens where she is new.
where sounds of angels echo through the halls
giving peace to the forlorn

where flowers scent the very ether
with peaceful smells of lavenders
where love and rest can be found
in the arms of Micheal and Raphael

but most of all tell her of my love
That Its neverending like the stars above
and that one day I will see her again
on the rainbow path leading her way

My precious child.. then we will be together
and together in paradise we will stay

In Gods restful heaven.. one day...

 

 

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  • Wonderful Job! I have a couple of title suggestions...perhaps "One Day" or "Dear God" would fit quite nicely. Thank you for your time and dedication.

    ~Raymond~


  • new light
    February 7

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    Amen

    this is a beautiful prayer filled with such love from such a gentle and great heart

    love this


  • LittleMoon silver member
    January 19
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    Beyond words from me


  • islekine gold member
    January 18

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    Amen...

    and thank you for taking the time...to pen such a beautiful prayer!
    I would like your permission to forward it to the family...
    Again...my heartfelt thanks!
    s

  • Bob Fox
    January 16
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    Poet

    Words can not do this justice. Amen.

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