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Reflection

When I look at you,

I am what I see.

You look back at me,

you are what you see.

A chronology of fact,

a defined identy,

a reflection of what I am.

A future reflection to reveal,

what I will become.

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  • Very nice poem...thank you so much for the entry!


  • Parearoo
    January 18
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    great

    Yet another wonderful peice of work from the mind of Mr. Mac McGovern. I loved the line, "A future reflection to reveal, what I will become." I like the idea of fore-shadowing it gives us. Over all, as always my friend, a very enjoyable read.
    (I hope ya'll are doing well, btw.) :-)