when i loved you like spring you said it was winter
when i loved you like summer you said it was winter
when i loved you like autumn you said it was winter
when i loved you like winter you acted like it was spring.
dawn breaks and its spring
the sun shines the birds sing
a bouquet of roses is what i bring
you emphesize the roses sting.
when i loved you like spring you said it was winter
when i loved you like summer you said it was winter
when i loved you like autumn you said it was winter
when i loved you like winter you acted like it was spring.
night falls and its winter time
i find your no longer mine
vinegar is what you made of the wine
all because i loved you like winter time.
Please tell me what you think
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Again your lyrical sounding poems amaze. I didn't have to reread the second chorus bc I felt it was the same and I closed my eyes there remembering the lines from the first chorus in my head then opened them to read the rest...
I feel very happy after reading this. Even though in the end it's nothing like "happy" It just feels that way to me. You express yourself with such ease~~~
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This is abstract and has a lyrical quality.
I like it a lot- great stuff!
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like this
but my conclusion is
drink beer
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