I want to write you a song
But it won't have pretty words
You won't enjoy my sense of sarcasm
Or my short bursts of anger
Maybe I'm just lost
Trying to find my way back home
You could've been my beginning
But you were already at the finish line
With something else
With someone...
else.
I have a disease
Undiagnosed, unknown, and incurable
I'm not scared because I refuse to be
This isn't the worst that has happened to me
I've been alone before, lost and alone
Searched for a cure for that, but no
So what's one more hurt to add to the pile
One more drink it'll all disappear for a while
Author notes
Another simple poem that I enjoyed writing a bit. Again, it's simple, and little parts can be thrown to interpretation and I think that's always fun. What do you think?
Please tell me what you think, and be honest! ^_^ I'm not scared of criticism, I love it!
Comments
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Superb
A very fine write, indeed. You have expressed your thoughts quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
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Great Job!
I really like it! I can relate to the part ''you wont enjoy my sense of sarcasm or my short bursts of anger''
Really well written! -
You did well. I love your lines.It reflects our journey in life through difficulties. A good one there. Bravooo!!!!!!!!!!
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I like this poem a lot
The first stanza is my favorite ... I like the fact that your poem lets the reader feel the hurt and hopelessness
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