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when it doesn't matter how you feel, now

Hey, girl, whatcha doin' down there?
Let's do it!
I love to talk, coulda used a few pounds,
I'm coolin' at a bar and I'm lookin' for some action.

People wouldn't lie for you on TV.
Every time I think of you
I'd gladly walk across the desert,
nobody does it better.

Nights in white satin;
If I could save time in a bottle,
you keep saying you got something for me
I was alright for a while.

I'd give up forever to touch you;
I was taught to believe.
Lady when you're with me I'm smiling.
Buck was born on a beautiful mornin'.

Thanks for the time that you've given me,
just smile for me and let the day begin.
Time can never mend:
a little rough around the edges.

Author notes

ok now in case you think i have lost all ability to write, thgis poem is not really a poem of my creation but, as per the request, a collection of song first lines, so plz, no comments on the writing ok hahaha Lady-Pegasus

1 Tony Orlando and Dawn - Knock three Times
2 Tone Loc - Wild Thing
3 Bob Seger - Night Moves
4 Tone Loc - Funky Cold Medina
5 Jewel - Who Will Save Your Soul
6 John Waite - I Aint Missing You
7 The Judds - Love can build a bridge
8 Carly Simon - Nobody Does It Better
9 Moody Blues - Nights In White Satin
10 Jim Croce - Time In A Bottle
11 Billy Ray Cirus - These Boots Are Made For Walkin`
12 Roy Orbison - Crying
13 Goo Goo Dolls - Iris
14 Alabama - The Maker Said Take Her
15 Styx - Lady
16 Bobby Goldsboro - A Butterfly For Bucky
17 Lionel Ritchie & The Commodores - Three Times A Lady
18 Jeffrey Osbourne - On the Wings of Love
19 wham - Careless Whisper
20 Bret Michaels - The Other Side Of Me
[title] Lacuna Coil - Unspoken

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  • dustookie2
    January 21

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    You know what I hate about reading this contest I have l these songs buzzing my brain....Think I am enjoying the music and the pieces are most entertaining Thank you for the smiles....Good luck in the contest


  • ScarletO gold member
    January 17
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    Hey, I thought I recognized some familiar words. It works pretty well though.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    January 17

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    Quite a collection you have there, made a fun read for sure, tho not that much sense in places..lol. Neat tho. Thanks for entering and good luck


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    January 16
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    This really came out good. I was able to recognize most of these, prior to reading your AN. Awesome.

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


    • Lady-Pegasus
      January 16

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      it was

      a very interesting challenge and fun to do indeed, so ty for that. This kinda turned funny in some places and most the others gelled better than mine did. I think it is interesting that you could recognize most as it, like me, was a very eclectic mix!

      • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
        January 16

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        Glad you had fun, as I had fun doing it when I had entered a contest not to long ago and did this. I might try it again just for ha has because I enjoyed doing it.


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    January 16

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    If I could read your mind,
    nobody does it better.
    Only a fool would brake your heart,
    so believe me when I say,
    this song was made for loving you

    Well....how about that
    (had to change some words)
    Good luck in this contest girlie,
    XXJeannette

    • Lady-Pegasus
      January 16
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      funny thing is, based on contest we couldn't even choose the songs or rearrange em it was completely random! was a blast for sure and created some interesting writes!

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