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in your arms

In your arms i'm whole
In your arms i'm torn into a thousand pieces
In your arms i'm solid
In your arms i turn to boiling water.

In your arms i'm so alive
Yet in your arms is how i die

In your arms i find my salvation
In your arms i'm condemned to hell
In your arms I'm found
In your arms I'm lost to the wrold

In your arms i'm a candle to the hurricane
In your arms you breathe sweet love into my soul

In your arms i'm shattered
In your arms i'm stitched back together

your my angel and my demon
my god and my devil
my savior and my saint
my murderer and my rapist.

you've taken from me the only part kept alive
the only part kept safe
the only part kept whole

my heart...
i would rather be in your arms than any where else
i love you.

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  • LookAway
    February 10, 2009
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    This is beautiful.


  • that-vegetarian-guy
    January 31, 2009

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    Beautiful

    I really liked this poem. The play off opposites makes it very interesting to me. It very much expresses the dichotomy of love. Thanks for the nice words on my poem This Love Lost.
    Pecae,
    Jim


  • Wulfys Broken Wings
    January 16, 2009
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    i like it it's very heart-felt ^ ^


  • Nyxs Daughter
    January 16, 2009

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    ...its really beautiful. In a morbid way. But i like it. It's full of emotion and it shows how you feel. Love you.