Music perfectly catching my hearts attention
Serenading me with words so pure, so eloquent
Caught in the stream of sounds kissing me gently
Etching through my masculine skin this feeling so unspoken, so unique
Understanding my resistance while capturing my thoughts through hugs
Showcasing fragile looks and expressionless emotions
Intricate details from that subtle touch, to the warm beat
To the harmony displayed by life's webs of intimacy
Patience being key to this virtue, keeping my soul in sync
Waiting to be hooked by their addicting rhymes
Ushering a new type of look and feel
Proclaiming this note to have lifted my hunger
Those words being key to my salvation
Euphoria swimming through my bloodstream
Reaching the core having in store simple simplicity
Happiness comes in many shapes and forms
Many types, many ways
The music that keeps your heart pure, your soul cleansed
Your emotions and feelings swaying left to right
The utmost diverse and complicated, where moments of unrealism takes place
Where you can for even a second consider yourself elated
Where for a moment your voice was their voice
Where the words you've heard for the first time feel like yours
Words taken from your mouth and sung so beautifully
So peacefully, as if someone actually wanted you to be happy.
Can you hear the music?
Comments
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ah misic - it touches us all, grabs us, squeezes us into magical shapes where the sighs are mellow rainbows of tone. a good poem.
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I like this, it moved me along as music does, a communication before or beyond words. I most liked 'Where for a moment your voice was their voice' and 'as if someone actually wanted you to be happy' and identify totally with the thought that music is able to cleanse your soul. Nice write.
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I like your word usage in this piece.
But I think it would read better if you broke it up into stanzas and didn't leave it as one huge piece.
Just my opinion though... -
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Your right. LOL
Sounds alot better. Thanks~
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