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A litium Battery Sounds Like A Drug Charge

Time has passed
She steps out here window
To realize the parade has past
There's Something about her I'll never know
But she don't beleive in jesus
And she's found a way to be so perfect
There's nothing I'd like more for the both us
But can't you tell I'm nervous

I always wake up to late
The world is flying by and i'm still lost here
In my own little place
Can you help me with all my fears
Or do I have to shut the gate
And crumble away from the years

So this life has passed
But what do I got to show
I look back and only see a blury past
The secret I hid is still deep inside my throat
But I swear you should preach to me more Jesus
Because I need something a little less imperfect
There's nothing but alittle bit of hate in us
But can't you tell that I am nervous

I always wake up to late
The world is flying by and i'm still lost here
In my own little place
Can you help me with all my fears
Or do I have to shut the gate
And crumble away from the years

Author notes

Its about my lovely fiance and I in a way but really its more just emotion outta flow the words arent littaral like most of my writes theres something that your supposd to feel in it.

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 24

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    This is very creative and interesting...great metaphor and deep thoughts...nicely done.

    Thank you for entering!

    mystic