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Terror

I take it all in
I have no words for  how  I am feeling
but inside my mind is realing
The sound of rockets flying by
penetrates my ears and leaves them ringing
I can't believe this is happening
so many innocent people dying around
In front of me there are body bags
the hold the  ones who have not survived
one of them  could be one of my family members
I can't bear the emotions  I will have if this ends up
being the truth.
Oh wait a second
scratch  what  I said about not knowing what to feel
I definitley do
and these feelings are 100%  real
Anger
because this war between  Palestine and Isreal
has been going on  for centureis
and needs to ends
I don't want to end up losing family and
friends due to this conflict
but honestly that might end up happening
and that makes me mad
is there no jutice in the world?

Author notes

the link to the picture i picked is below
http://www.israelnewsagency.com/jewishisraelchildrenterrorism.jpg


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  • azlyn gold member
    January 21, 2009
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    I hear...I am confused as well. I suppose we do what we can from where we are...