filled in with the hopelessness
there lay a pink rose
sheltered by the dark of night
as disturbed as it chose
whence came the sunlight
sweeping in through the open door
it shut itself and scorned away
then howled in cries of gore
days passed and moved as hands of clock
the pink began to fade
the hue began to darken up
with monotonous shades of jade
'no hopes no light for me' it felt
I'm born to live in dark
to bear this pain all days all night
was all it thought and marked
what lay ahead it never saw
and never reached for hope
never tried to free itself out
from wretched doom's rope
it became what it never was
and hence ended its life
just because what it always thought of
was not hope but only strife
though life is same not for all
but it always gives you chance
to free yourself from negative's rope
and bathe in joy of dance
don't loose your hope, never do
you might soon see your spark
for someone said, there always lies
a silver streak in dark
-Neha
16th Jan 2009
Author notes
For all those who feel disheartened because of any reason...
Never loose hope, you might be close to the finish line, don't stop running!
God bless everyone
-Neha
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Outstanding
This is so sad- the rose left to fade away in the darkness. I agree - we should never give up even when things seem bleak. I liked your choice of language and the way that you told a story even though it was tinged with sadness. I liked that the poem ended on a light note. The rhyme is smooth and not forced at all.



