Oh God you do not know
The agony in my soul;
Ripping my guts apart;
Disembowelling me;
Making me die inside.
The agony in my soul;
Ripping my guts apart;
Disembowelling me;
Making me die inside.
A contest entry
- Love by alwaysapartofme.
700 points, ended February 7, 58 entries
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I love a little bit of disembowelling from time to time. But otherwise this seemed to me to be just about 1000 miles on the wrong side of depressing.
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A bit bloody serious this one, Arcy! Just as well I am in a good mood today or else it might be throat-slitting time for yours truly! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
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Wow very strong words expressing the emotion you feel deep inside. Greatly written.
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...yes, God knows each ache we have......it is our job to cry out to Himn and ask for comfort and relif of this crap satan throws our ways in life -
Thank you for sharing this with me & the Group.....Bear ~
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i love the use of such vivid words to get your point across. very nice!
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Compact and to the point
Good write. Buff
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wow so much in so few words! very good work.
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