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My Valentine

 

 

captured by your smile

passion blooms within my heart

with each glimpse of you

 

euphoria swells

contentment inundates me

for your love I hold

 

you are my essence

so vital to who I am

center of my life

 

tell me you are mine

for all of my tomorrows

be my valentine

 

 

 

 

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  • carole21
    January 20, 2009
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    nicely penned . . congrats on the bronze . . like the moving background !!


  • ShelleyA
    January 16, 2009

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    A beautiful write and skillfully crafted Senryu. You express your love for your husband vividly in this haiku string. Lovely depth of feeling. Well penned. Best wishes in the contest.

  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 16, 2009

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    lovely

    chain kus are beautiful, when poised like this, touches hearts of many as we share romance
    within hearts of the love of ones life, thank you for this entry...good luck
    mm


  • Frogzter gold member
    January 16, 2009
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    Awwwwwwwwwww! This is so sweet and cute!