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Islands of Liquidity

Islands of individuality
we float in seas and oceans through the years.
Lapped by the calm of cool liquidity
love grows within, diffusing joys and tears,
our many shores containing turmoils' fears.
Each lapping wave spills newly-garnered ties
to bind the love wherein our living lies.

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  • contess
    February 15
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    really nice


  • contess
    February 15
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    i really like your style,,wise and full of experience,,the poem speaks for it's self!


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    February 3

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    Islands of individuality ... I loved that opening line.
    Wonderful to the prompt and perfect in form.
    Thank you for such a well written piece.

    Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 16
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    SO, SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    So very soothing to read! This leaves one with a warm and soft feeling deep within. 's