I've known you just for a while,
yet it's you I long to see
but what are the chances,
of you falling in love with me?
What's so great about you when;
You're imperfect in every perfect way?
But I just can't find the reason
For the times you blow me away
You make me grin with just a smile
But sadly it's because of her
You make me laugh with just a giggle
But to me you're simply bitter
In the state of bliss, I find myself
I can hear every beat of my heart
It all happens when you're near
but the opposite when we're apart
It's becoming all too complicated
"Love" is simply not for me
'cause when they say you're for each other,
what choice do I have but to agree?
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Random. 
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- Love by alwaysapartofme.
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thanks, Maan.
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very very awesome! i love the ending part:
It's becoming all too complicated
"Love" is simply not for me
'cause when they say you're for each other,
what choice do I have but to agree?
this is my favorite part.
wonderful job it shows what a lot of people go through when they love someone but don't know if they love them. there is good emotions behind this.
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Thank you soo much!
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