Only hurts when I breathe
My Mind goes back to that time
Before the Pain and hurt that I caused
My Mistakes done out of Fear
Who was I to make you go through that?
Too late for another Chance
I have Loved you all this time still,
I stopped breathing when I walked away
My Heart died in the aftermath
I give anything for one last embrace
that last dance, to hear you say I love you
to hold me and Never let me go.
to keep breathing
to hear I forgive you,
I'd give it all for us
but you are so Far away....
Author notes
A poem I wrote last year after I walked away from someone I loved.. it was inspired by Far Away- Nickleback.... I just didn't want to post it then.. I was alittle afraid to ... but here it is..
Tell me what you Think?
Comments
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Well written....and emotional write of courage...and the bittersweet feelings make it very powerful! G.
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Really good. I love self expression and i can feel the true emotion beneath the poem. Great work I hope to read more of your poetry in the near future
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I LOVE IT!!!! anyways i kinda feel your pain even if my story is different....i love your poems and some of them help me
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