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communion.

kneeling before the rails
an unworthy heart
to his arms outstretched
little diamonds coursing down
searching for love, full and free
          ...
searching for love, full and free
little diamonds coursing down
to his arms outstretched
an unworthy heart
kneeling befor the rails.

Author notes

this poem is based on the feelings of a lost soul, finding his way to the cross of Christ, in a church.
Trying to sift through the jumble of emotion in his heart.

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    January 20

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    Just beautiful and flows like a wonderful heart felt song...soft beat of forgiveness...excellent and thank you kindly for sharing it with me


  • Arkbear gold member
    January 16
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    Hello ~

     

    There are Rules in place for this contest.....I am sorry you have not bothered to read any of them

     

    .....also, this Theme is not Creative as Rules ask for....religious Themes are most common and will score poorly.....if you want to enter another write, you may do so, but Rules are very important in the PO' Contests

     

    God bless,

     

    Bear ~

     

     


  • maralisa silver member
    January 16
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    aw a wonderful poem full of depth and emotion good luck in the contestmaralisa