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april.


i could
sleep late into your laugh
and draw summers when we would
get crisp and fried under our
tropical sun.

aprils
were always meant to be blue,
i think.

especially after you were
the lonely place on the couch.

i miss you mom.

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  • headsouth
    August 16

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    hey charu of course i've got to comment on my favourite poem of yours! This one really blew me away, I teared while reading it and read it over and over again. The words are so perfectly placed and divided, and it had a very clear emotional progression from start to finish which is really difficult to achieve in such a short length. But you did it so well.

    'especially after you were
    the lonely place on the couch.'

    My favourite line.


  • broken-colours
    March 10
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    aww.
    :/


  • Tinkerbell-Or-Me
    January 16

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    "
    aprils
    were always meant to be blue,
    i think.

    especially after you were
    the lonely place on the couch."


    aww.
    i'm speechless in a sad, beautiful way.
    you're amazing.


  • divebar
    January 16
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    stunning


  • redbird
    January 16
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    oh my, ....that's all i can say.


  • monstruo
    January 16
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    beautiful.


  • transit
    January 16

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    aaww

    I remmeber sitting on the couch and I am not sure if that is the one but it just kept reminding me of the picture taken on your birthday.

    It's sad the things left behind and we still feel like thay are right beside us but somehow, they are not and it is he most frustrating thing but just remember it has been so long and the days will pass and you will have better days and things will be happier later on when you have someone for yourself and a whole family to focus and be the best parent

    At the end of the rainbow, your mum is always watching you and you will be safe for the soul never dies.


  • stasis
    January 16

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    This is so sad... incredibly deep and beautiful though, I absolutely love it.

    ♣ Tegan


  • chloris
    January 16

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    [as promised on my page, i will talk of the poem] ummm the poem is very poignant and wonderfully expressed.

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