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more than enough.



words pass between us
in a whirl.

sometimes, i want to keep you
and understand everything.

i want to see the sky you see,
watch the leaf you blew away

have the autumn you promised
you'd give me.

i don't know what you're about
or what you like.

i just have a feeling- and god,
it's more than enough.

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  • transit
    January 16

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    yes that is all we need sometimes. believe me, sometimes in class when i am just looking at someone for a long period of time, it is like they know and thye look back and it so awkward. even you did last ime

    but the thing is, you have a feeling inside and though the time was short, atleats you had those few years. A few years of a mother's love can last for a lifetime. better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all. I know it is so wrong sometimes but still, I guess we have to look on the bright side. life is not going to be kind but we have to learn to fight it. lovely poem

    loveeee youu much *yes*
    transit~


  • stasis
    January 16

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    "i just have a feeling- and god,
    it's more than enough."

    What a perfect ending... I don't even know what to say about this. Fantastic.

    ♣ Tegan