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Contest: Wanted: Zen Poetry by Poet Muse

The roses are red

Go to bed with itchy butt

wake, smelly fingers.


A contest entry

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  • poetryality silver member
    January 31

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    I honestly cannot see what the "roses" have to do with the "smelly butt" but I must admit this poem made me chuckle. LOL What an interesting Senryu! The best to you in the contest.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    January 29

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    Brilliant Thoughts, Poet!!!

    Thank you for your thought-provoking entry. I like your sense of humor, something the ancient haiku poets mastered as well. Wishing you all the best!! Peace always, xx Cyn


  • redbarchettadrive gold member
    January 28
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    This would confuse Confucius!

    funny tho


  • dustookie2
    January 23

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    Well I guess this is the voice of experience talking or something else not going there ..... then could the need for a good strong worm mixture. Then again perhaps you were the mind behind the credits on that TV showGood luck in the contest