Immersed in the thought of enlightenment,
One will go through extreme practices
But upon the completion little satisfaction is felt.
And with these people a mockery plays
Showing the light and teasing the senses
Creating soulless emotions…
…That feature an angel,
hosting a skeletons wings.
Author notes
Prompt:
http://dianar87.deviantart.com/art/Redemption-80582421
The ORME -- related to Star Fire, and also known as The Philosopher’s Stone, the Elixir of Life, the White Powder of Gold, Ma-na or Manna -- is also an acronym for “Orbitally Rearranged Monoatomic Elements”.
Also in the book I'm reading helps people to reach an enlighten state blocks their spirte at the same time.
Just a random fact 
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Comments
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Love the poem as much as the random facts. Never heard of the acronym before. Sounds like out of control atomic energy but within boundaries ... heh
... enlightenment is not for the materialistic. That's my interpretation anywho. This poem can work on many levels of humanity versus the divine though.
Great job and congrats on the Bronze!
s~w
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Very cool take on the picture. The search for enlightenment can indeed take people through many different paths and practices.
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