I must have missed the first appointment
while your disappointment
left me backwards and bent
because I've spent
my whole life
inside
a bee hive
buzzing around
biding time
waiting for my
queen to arrive,
and I'm fine
if fine means breathing
and seething
between my teeth
my hearts beating
if that is the meaning
behind the words I am seeing
floating in space
what are you looking at?
Why don't you budge?
to busy
trying to judge
me
isn't sad to know
we are all the same
with unconscious bodies
ran by half brains
with drug and nicotine stains--
I feel my intellect
catching fire
As ashes collect
And edges tear
like memories from my bodies core
thoughts seize
sinking fast into an ashy past
of opinions and facts;
not knowing how to act
when cause and effect
refuse to let things stay the same-
our predetermined names
are to be hanged
like picture frames and family
trees
I'm not some plant or branch
with rotten leaves.
I'm tired of boom box and stereo types
taking flight
I'm a poser ‘cus I’m a girl rapping and I’m white.
well how about you take your opinions
and suck them dry
grind them to sand
and help me understand
why you're so much better
than me
With the criticism you
apparently
give constructively
Well how is this for constructive criticism?
I fucked your lover;
And he sure as hell
liked my white girl rhythm.
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Motherfucking wow.
This was beyond amazing.
Quite quite quite beautiful.
I loved just, everything.
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Haa. This is great.
The last lines made me smile.
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This is incredible baby.
You've still got the talent and I miss you.
The last lines made me grin, such a nice way to end this.
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Hahaahahaha! I love this!!! Too good, too good. Jane
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Well, that was a lot at once
I'm addicted to your poetry. And the rest of your groups as well. There's something about it that I just love
GREAT Rap
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