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colorful
rising with beauty
born from light and prism
the music of        stars and rain
arching above                  the dark clouds
bringing hope                           through thunder
inspiring so many                               poems and dreams
dip your brush in                                  this cosmic paint
find a story                                         within to tell
find a story                                         within to tell
 dip your brush in                                  this cosmic paint
inspiring so many                               poems and dreams
bringing hope                           through thunder
arching above                  the dark clouds
the music of        stars and rain
born from light and prism
rising with beauty
colorful
 

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A rainbow (and its reflection). Hmm.

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  • Darkwell
    January 29

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    this is soooo beautiful and wow the work to make those colors and the reflection too, brillient just so lovely


  • Mariana gold member
    January 17

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    I am stunned by the beauty of this write in its entirety...If it was in my contest...it would win gold without a shadow of a doubt. Bravo Poet...I am most impressed!!

    Mariana


  • badnovocaine
    January 16

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    hummm.. how did you do that? Its amazing!! Very pretty and colorful, not just the form itself but also how you wrote it. You did really well. This caught my attention right away


  • intanglio2ring
    January 16

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    Wonderful!

    I usually don't appreciate using all the higher tech in poems, but this was certainly a colorful and enhancing entry. The prism of color accentuated the poem and it was a joy to read and look upon!
    Good Luck in the contest!
    Tang


  • Slinky-milinky
    January 16

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    Wow! this is a proper feast for the eyes, you title is great in the way that it gave nothing away but also fits the piece perfectly. I love that you chose to reflect it back again aswell, good ob and good luck in the contest!

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