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Anxiety

UR CHOCKIN ME....I CAN'T BREATH
I'M COUGHIN...PLEASE HELP ME
UR SMOTHERIN ME....OXYGEN PLEASE
{TEARS FORMIN IN MY EYES}
{THROAT'S CLOSING}
{GASPIN FOR AIR}
HURRY PLEASE...I CAN'T BREATH
DA ROOM IS SPINNING
MY VISION BECOMIN FUZZY
MY HANDS IN THE AIR REACHIN FOR YOU....PLEASE HELP ME
WHY DO U STAIR AT ME...JUST FREAKIN HELP ME
CAN'T YOU SEE I'M SUFFERING???
GOD OH PLEASE YOUR THE ONLY ONE HERE THT CARE...SO PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THUR JUST STANDIN THUR WHILE I SUFFOCATE...PLEASE OH PLEASE HELP ME!!!


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  • Almae
    January 20
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    AWW THNX!


  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    January 19

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    I understand how you feel. I go through simular things. So, yes keep holding on. A sad, but beautiful poem.