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String

End of end was sticking out

like wire

hot string

pulled it

ball rolled

straight out

that narrow

window of her

screaming soul

a 99 foot drop

into ice and snow

there she lay

a bunch of string

her life became

smoking

on cold and drugs.

Angel wings

  dream on.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 











 

Author notes

Coloring in my world

Wild wild Missy came to see me today, a moving train to stop beautiful Missy who means well.

Touch me back

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Comments


  • Pursed Poker Lips
    April 16

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    Love the structure of the piece, it adds personality and intensity to what is written. Loved it from top to bottom.
    Rachael

  • Michael P
    January 16
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    "that narrow window of her"-excellent Rheea


  • Brazos silver member
    January 16

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    Living on the edge, there are times you may fall, but sometimes the reward is great as well. There is someone holding on to the other end of the string, isn't there?

    Fly, and dream on, green-eyes.

    Forever my love,
    Brazos

  • dillpickle62
    January 16
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    ...

    WOW!!!