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Dancing Birds

dancing birds of a feather
in sync
together they
are one.

watch them dance
on wings they
fly

Soaring higher
than we ever
thought they could

Author notes

No more than ten lines
Originality and creativity are your friends
Prompt:

"and the swallows dance above the sun"

A contest entry

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Comments


  • penman gold member
    January 21
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well done. Congratulations on the bronze.


  • Polaja Greeters member
    January 15

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    This is nicely done - I like the way you kept it free of distraction and painted a lovely picture thank you for entering!



    Polly


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    January 15
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    nicely written very pretty