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Willow [amongst the forgotten]

i.

A child lay crying,

Beautiful, beautiful Willow,

Loneliness coincided fear,

Ghostly figures oh, so near,

 

ii.

Blood orange red lips,

Lavender soft hair,

Skin, yellowy hues,

Eyes of indigo blues,

 

iii.

She lay there alone,

Beautiful, beautiful Willow,

Eyes with reminiscent tears,

Of all her life’s haunted fears,

 

iv.

Dress of musky orange,

Faded to a masked grey,

Eyes, scortching, red,

Heart yellped and bled,

 

v.

Body- dry as dust,

Beautiful, beautiful Willow,

Slowly faded away,

She slowly faded away.

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Willow. May she rest in peace.

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  • Desire gold member
    January 29

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    Wow~

    Excellent piece penned and this one swelled the eyes also tugged hard at the Heartstrings~
    Powerful images also emotions~
    Beautifully brought to Life though sad to inhale the pain
    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 29

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    Thank You for Your Entry ~

    The background with the font style just lock together so damn beautifully and bring the poem more to life as I felt Willows heart and soul and then found myself mourning as she leaves

    Amazing poem
    ♥
    Best of Luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda

  • A-muse-in-writer
    January 17

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    Wow

    This is a stunning piece for one so young. No one has commented on this? What a shame. I love the imagery the wording, the mood. It is all great.