Silver rings adorn long fingers
Itching to curl around pencils
To sketch a new face
Un-marked from trying to prove
That I am an adult
Multiple sets of hands
Have labeled my body
As unconventional beauty
I am not sure if I like this yet
Author notes
This sounds rather sad, i don't know I've been in a rather melancholy mood today... I blame the weather
I'm sure that tomorrow I will be my normal happy self so no worries.
A contest entry
- AP Family~ (Contest) by ZachP.
400 points, ended January 31, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hands .... by dutch2lips.
700 points, ended May 21, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please. i need spelling errors pointed out. please.
Comments
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it is a little enigmatic, do you mean the hands that itch to pencil your face? or to draw as an artist? ... hmm, dont answer these questions tho, its a poem, it should set people thinking, which this one did me, thank you for entering
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def has mii attention
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I'm the same way . . . up and down, up and down. Sometimes those days just get to me.
This is a beautiful poem. Welcome to the family =]
Sorry for taking so long to get to you, life has been crazy lately
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oh no no no!!!! i love it.
i was quoting your last line
) cause i love that line too. hahah
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Oh dear, some days I swear I am so blond it hurts lol sorry I misunderstood you and thank you for reading
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haha this was great. i love the to prove that I'm an adult
and I'm not sure if i like this yet.
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I like that you like that line,
but may I ask why you are not sure if you like it yet?
I would greatly enjoy your input
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Excellent!
You have a gift of penning potent lines that say so much in few words. I enjoyed this alot, thanks for sharing here. Peace, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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Aw thank you so much!
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Oh these are for you
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Joyce, omg, this is absolutely beautiful and if you don't like this poem, shame on you! It's gorgeous you are so good at poetry, I'm jealous
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AW thank you your so sweet!
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No I'm not, you deserve all the praise you get, I'm truthful not sweet
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Joyce, this is teriffic. I know exactly what you mean about it too, and you do have such unconventional beauty. I'm envious of it, seriously. Your look is so wrong it's right, and that's what I love about you. Even in your poetry it shows.
You're growing so much. I'm so proud!!! lol. All - in - all, I absolutely love this, and I'm bookmarking it.
♣ Tegan
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Thank you, i mean that
just thank you
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Nice job on this one. The last line is most expressive and brings meaning to the entire poem. Well done!
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