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Come Back

I'll always be here
When you come stumbiling back.

I'll welcome you
When you see the errors of your ways.

I won't blame you
When you realize you were wrong.

You're gone.

But you'll be back...
    ...You have to come back.

Don't prove me wrong.
Don't let me down.
Don't throw away my love.

I'll be here.

If...
  ...When you return.

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Completely random - written for no particular reason...like all my stuff

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  • islekine
    January 28, 2009

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    I like it!

    Especially the way you did the last line...if...when!
    love it!
    Write on and on!


  • storiesuntold
    January 18, 2009

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    Very well done

    If only we could do our best to help our friends and if they dont listen and walk away know that one day should they see and want toi return they would find open arms for we are all just children finding our way all our life


  • StarIlluminated
    January 16, 2009

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    I like it Katrina!!!! It's really sweet and emotional and all out greatness!

    *KT*


  • starving4perfection
    January 16, 2009

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    aww its got alot of emotions never mind random, its good!!!
    thank you for entering my contest and good luck!! =]