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I'm Yours

A blood rush throughtout my body;
I'm going dizzy.
You start to fade away
But I dont want you to.
I want you to stay
Here with me
But your already gone
And I'm alone.
Still wishing for you
To be here with me again
Though I'm not sure that you
Feel the same.
I wish I could fix this
But you made the mistake.
Or maybe I did
When I became yours.
Was that a mistake?
Or was I just falling for your
Sweet, intoxicating blasphemy?
But I can't deny that I
Love you.
That I don't care about you
That it wouldn't hurt me if you
Were gone forever
I can't fight this anymore
I give in
I'm yours.

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  • brokenhearted1234
    January 23
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    love it baby girl,
    im at school right now lol
    get on so we can talk on here