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Your Eyes Tell Me

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Your eyes tell me everything

that I need to hear you say

They tell me you love me

and that you really care

They tell me when you desire me

or when you feel kinda bad

They tell me if I hurt you

if I made you mad I know

Your eyes tell me you're happy

they tell me if you're sad or upset

They tell me our lovemaking

is the best you ever had

Your lack of words doesn't matter

I just look deep in your eyes

All my questions are answered

as your heart silently speaks...

 

 

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  • catz Moderators member
    January 18
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    A lovely poem 'Tis said that the eyes are the mirror of the soul, and I agree. So much can be seen through the eyes, both good and bad. I like your poem about the good part, though. It's nicely written and carries much feeling.

    Good luck in the contest

    Dee

  • well... well...this makes me smile again..and the role of the eyes you are portraying is very meaningful to bring the love around..love it..well done..


  • faderman1959
    January 16
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    Nicely spoken! The eyes are the most fascinating! They say so much without saying anything at all.


  • arafura gold member
    January 15
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    Yes it's all in the eyes! Lovely poem.