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Touch Kiss

Come with me, let us love

warm me with those eyes

Help me to forget the pain

Let your words cover my soul,

and your touch, slide Into my skin

like so much smoke

You opened my soul, and saw my passion

And silver clouds rain down forgotten tears

as my soul you awake,  an Inch at a time

        I love you

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  • blank1 silver member
    October 23

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    wow,this is very beautiful,love can bring the most beautiful happiness or the worst sadness youve ever had and either way its still worth it


    • Deceits Tears silver member
      October 23
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      Aww thankyou for droppin by It Is much appreciated
      I hope you are well


  • twelfthknight silver member
    August 30

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    This is so beautiful! its such a touching love poem, you have great talent btw I love the background. Best of luck in the contest x


  • redmoonnrizing silver member
    June 14
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    LOVE IT

    Ahhhhh....love is the sweetest candy of all...so very beautiful...

  • Bruce silver member
    May 8

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    Beautifully written! as my soul you awake, an Inch at a time: that's a wonderful line. An inspiring poem to read early in the morning!


  • liltulip gold member
    April 1
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    so beautifully written

    i could feel the love in this, such wonderful words, thank you for sharing these with us!


  • DeJaBlue gold member
    March 18

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    What a beautiful sensual write...so exquisitely pretty!! Amy


  • DogFish silver member
    February 6

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    "Let your words cover my soul,
    and your touch, slide Into my skin
    like so much smoke..."

    words as enebriating as a warm glass of brandy!


  • AshlEEshAnnOn
    February 5
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    In Love ♥

    I love this, but i'm very interested in the person who wrote it....


  • penman gold member
    February 1
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Cloggs
    January 27
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    very nice my piece of fruit.


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    January 27

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    Beautifully written. Each word portraying its own destiny and blissful passion. Really enjoyed this one!


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    January 25
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    Wow this is really pretty poetry Kiwi. Sensual and soft. I love it. Good Luck!


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    January 25

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    This is a beautiful poem & the your words create a some wonderful imagery.

    good luck
    kat


  • Swangrnv gold member
    January 25
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    so sweet..

    and so powerful to express this kind of love for someone who moves you so, is a wonder to behold.


  • alwaysapartofme
    January 16

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    Wow! very great. who ever this person is is very lucky to have you! it is very beautiful! good luck in the contest.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    January 15

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    This is a beautiful poem of love. The person that you had in mind when you wrote this is truly blessed.

    Great job.

    Mike

    • Deceits Tears silver member
      January 16
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      Thankyou for your comment my friend, Seeeee I told ya I'm all over the place
      Must be all this time I hav on my hands huh,
      Always a pleasure when you visit

      Sorry I took so long to reply I didnt realise I was still logged on, so I baked you some cookies hahaha

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