im so sorry about all the hell i've put you through
all the things i said that i didn't mean
when i told you to leave
i was hoping you would stay
push my hate away
i understand that i was wrong
that i should have relized the way you felt
before it was to late
but i let my past controll me
i showed you nothing but hate
how could i expecte you to stay
when all i did was push you away
like you where nothing i threw you to the side
not thinking of the price that i would pay
only hoping you wouldn't go away
i wanted to love you
i really did
to show you that there was a better side to me
but my past wouldn't set me free
each time i'd get close
i'd throw it away
let that dark side of me take controll
you tried so hard
you stuck it out for so long
i knew the day was coming when you wouldn't be able to take it anymore
and still i let our love fall to the floor
im so sorry for all the pain i caused
but maybe your better off alone
Author notes
i have been writing so much latly and i finally have a chnce to post some of it please read and comment.....
love the shark
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wow!
such a truly heartfelt piece, expressed beautifully through raw emotions, well written.
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Fantastic
A truly heartfelt piece filled with emotion and raw honesty. Truly wonderful. I was hooked from beginning to end although there were a few mispellings but they didn't detract one bit from the tone and feeling which I got from your words. Thanks
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brilliant, touched a peice of me there, and i couldnt express it any better
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I can understand your feelings here. Kinda like the book "I Hate you, Dont Leave Me". Its about having emotional baggage and letting the past interfere with relationships, to the point where you push others away without wanting to intentionally.
I iliked the raw emotion you out out here in this piece. There are some spelling errors but not enough to take my attention away. I loved it. Thanks for posting this.
can relate:
when i told you to leave
i was hoping you would stay
push my hate away
i understand that i was wrong
that i should have relized the way you felt
before it was to late
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It's Done...Stick a Fork In it
There are times we don't realize how green is the grass is until it has faded. **i understand that i was wrong
that i should have relized the way you felt
before it was to late** Your muse speaks and is heard.
Well done.
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summore
thank you so much for reading
i am greatful
i have just now found the time to add my newest work to the site there are a few others i have added as well if you are interested chech them out
again thank you so much
i am greatful
love the shark
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