Changing Me ~ senryu
© copyright 2005 Bonita M Quesinberry
I opened His book
His love taking all my breath
and changing my life
In a list
A contest entry
- Wanted: Zen Poetry by Cynthia Gaines.
2100 points, ended February 20, 60 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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The Word is most influential. I cannot see how anyone who reads the words of God is not automatically changed for the best in life. There is a multitude of information written in these few words. An excellent Senryu dear poet. I wish you well in the challenge!
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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Beautiful Sentiments...
Thank you for sharing your beautifully thought-provoking entry with us. I'm wishing you all the best!! Take care... Peace always, xx Cyn 
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Thank YOU, Cyn, for such encouragement. Much love and peace to you!
BonQ
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Beautiful.
So much revealed in so few words.
Excellent.
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Oh, the bible is certainly that book that can do it. Lovely
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many open his book, but only a handful then open their minds. Great entry, Blessings and all the best in the contest.
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You bring a breath of air to life...with it the spirituality of the moment....man needs to find spirituality holding our hopes aloft seeking inner peace. Good luck in the contest.
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Simply Beautiful. Oh how I know I can make things so complicated but really it is so simple as your said in your poem. Just open the Bible and his love takes all my breath and being and changes my life for the good. Just a wonderful read. So much wisdom with so few words.
Much Love To You Always,
Blessings With Your Health & Loved Ones,
Your Sis,
Kelle Marie 
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BEAUTIFUL!
This is a beautiful testimony of your love for the Lord and His love for us. What wonderful words you have penned here and telling us a wonderful story in so few words. This is a poem I can see was written from your heart. Good luck in the contest. Your friend in Poetry, Mysty Rain
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Thank you so much, Mysty, for such an encouraging review. I pray those few words of mine encourage others to open God's Holy book.
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Simplicity, beauty, and faith here.....a refreshing short glimpse into your life!
...love Rosemary
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Ahhh, thank you, sweet Rose! I popped in just before going to bed to find you've been wandering all over my poetic halls.
You are such a doll and, alas, I've been a bit remiss in keeping up with your work: I've been ill for the last few days and still not on top of my game.
Much love and hugs, SisBon
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I like this Bonnie. All the best in this contest.
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Thank you very much, Janice! My prayer is that, despite the brevity of this senryu, it will encourage others to open God's book.
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excellent
This is beautiful
I am thinking of entering
Best of luck in the contest...
Hope you come read mine as well
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Thank you so much, Susan, for such an encouraging review. I've been away for awhile but I do remember reading some of your fine poetry! It is good to see you still are roaming A/P's halls.
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Beautiful and the angels around His throne just sighed.
All the best,
MJ.
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What an uplifting review! Thank you so much, MJ.
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Awesome
That is all we need, the Book and open it up to receive love and be changed. Love it!
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Thank you so much, SisD, for the encouragement. Indeed, all we need is the BOOK!
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