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The Shape of Emptiness

is there a no-thing
hidden in the nothingness?
paradox isn't.

Author notes

On the difference between "nothing" and "no-thing".

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  • poetryality silver member
    January 31

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    To compare these two words that fill no void is impressive, and surely lends a "zen" reflection to the reader's mind. Very well composed poetry here poet. I wish you well in the challenge.


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    January 29
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    Brilliant!!!

    Thank you for your profound entry, and good luck inthe contest!! Peace, xx Cyn


  • Jesann gold member
    January 29
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    Mmmm very inspiring thoughts.
    Perfect title, well done.

  • Very wise indeed!


  • Janice M Pickett
    January 23
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    Great job Jack. No thing could hurt this write, nothing at all. It's really good.


  • dustookie2
    January 23

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    To contemplate the hidden revealing the space....the zennish thought of empty.... Good luck in the contest....am so enjoying the time and thoughts of this contest. Thank you.


  • DolceVito gold member
    January 15
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    Zensational


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    January 15
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    Curious, I enjoyed this.

    All the best,
    MJ.

  • Bruce silver member
    January 15

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    Hey I like this. It's very Zen sounding. Not sure I understand everything, but I feel there's wisdom there to be got! Nice job!

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