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Perfect

We're perfect for each other.
We're perfectly in love with each other.
He kisses me
From my head to my toes,
As he tells me
That he loves me.
I smile,
As I say it back.
I'm caught up in the moment,
Alone

With him.
I can't stop loving him.
Hopefully, he won't stop loving me.
I'm perfect for him,
And he's perfect for me.

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  • alwaysapartofme
    January 16, 2009

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    wonderful! it shows how to people can be perfect for each other. and is how true love should be! wonderful work.