Heart feeling like a rocky road,
Seems my life’s in overload.
I know You’re here, that You’re there.
I just need to hear You care.
Tell me that You love me,
with the beat of my heart.
Tell me that You love me;
let the word impart.
Tell that You’ll keep me;
my name on Your lapel.
Tell me You complete me.
Truth that rings this bell.
You lift me from my rocky road,
Short out my life’s overload.
I see You here, see You there.
Your Spirit says, with a dare...
I tell that I love you,
with each drop of blood.
Make My grace complete you,
rushing like a flood.
I keep your soul in My pocket.
I’ll bring you home like a rocket.
There I’ll show you what is true,
and tell you I love you.
A contest entry
- listen to me... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 20, 2009, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like the tone and the immages ..very moving thought..well done..
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Thanks, P.K.
I appreciate the HM.
God bless...
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WOW! STRONG AND EXPRESSIVE. STRAIGHT TO THE POINT AND FILLED WITH IMAGERY. I REALLY LIKE THIS
'I tell that I love you,
with each drop of blood'
IF ONLY MORE WOULD REMEMBER. THANK YOU FOR LETTING GOD USE YOU. KEEP WRITING BROTHER! GOD BLESS YOU ALWAYS
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Heard you won't doing so hot. Glad you could come by. When I sent you the IM to come by and read I had a sense you could use this.
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Wow this is great..I love it.
What a great pic prompt..and a wonderful take on it.
Very well done.
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you are heaven sent.
thank you for your poems that encourage, and thank you for this poem that lifts my spirit, letting me know I'm not alone. -
Why is it when a certian feeling running through me you send me something like this? Thank you for doing so, I needed it right now brother. It was great, with xlnt rhyme and meter. But more importantly.... The words were fantastic! Thanks bro, I love ya man...GETS
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A Little Birdie Told Me...
...you know, the one that comes down like a dove.
Love ya, bruddah...
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This is so real and to the point
You have done a great job here...mac
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