A Journey in Mystery
©copyright 1995 Bonita M Quesinberry
The trip began long before time
a journey of your soul and mine.
But our bodies and earthy minds,
yesterday, were unaware,
while fraught with strife and despair.
Our turn, a time when our souls
were lost to each other's care.
But the time, though oft seemed not,
was for the earthy mind to grow;
that mind out of touch with the spirit
as we moved to and fro.
Sudden it was not,
though it may have seemed so,
when finally our souls, freed of darkness,
once again caressed a knowing touch
of such indescribably softness.
And, so now, a new journey begins;
a journey shrouded in God's gentle
veil of mystery.
Memories now of no consequence
to be left in mind's history:
to serve as lessons well learned,
rewards hard earned.
So join my spirit now
for the journey of a lifetime,
Your soul and mine.
Come walk with me, as only our
souls can, hand in hand.
Dance with me, our souls merged,
to the angels' sweet band.
Soar with my soul
among the stars
As we travel wide and far.
There we will learn, unconditional
friends and lovers,
Safe in the spirit… of God's turn.
Destination… heaven.
In a list
A contest entry
- You are the destination ... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended January 30, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh, you've danced here with your words, an elegant dance and after it, the lovely plotted point-heaven indeed good luck to you in this contest
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A write that evokes feelings and tenderness
Well done
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So beautiful. Oh the journey of our own personal relationship with the Lord is definitely the destination of Heaven if it is the Lord that you seek. To walk, talk and even dance with Him is all so beautiful. Gee Bon your poems are just amazing. The imagery and flow is flawless and it touched my soul deeply as I read through your beautiful dance with the Lord in your journey with Him. I love the title A Journey A Mystery. Oh yes it is Bon, isn't it? Best wishes always in the contest with blessing us with your profound wisdom. Just another golden poem for us all to read.
Love You With Blessings,
Your Sis,
Kelle Marie
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Ah..the words for the invitation for HIM..shows the readiness and the peace for finding HIM..very intimate journey of the words is bringing the calm in impact..well done...
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Ah....I see another winner here coming up! You are a master of words and writing....How delightfully you weave this write into our journey towards heaven. All of us from so different places, situations, all will merge to be part of the heavenly community.....A delightfully inspirational write of excellence...So heart warming!
Love Rosemary
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i cant read someones work and not tell them what i think. i like the idea of having this destination.
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What you think, dear one, is important to me.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Luv & hugs, BonnieQ
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