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Liquid Memory




Lie with me softly
upon warm sands
and watch the sunset

as hips sway.

~

Breathe me in,

this sweet seduction;
my perfumed scent.

Kiss me gently
as whispers cajole you
closer to my caress.

Let me taste
your fluid flowing affection
in pearls of liquid longing.

~

Two shall love like this, nevermore.

Passion pulsates within this flower
as the sparkle you ignited
outshines these curious constellations.


♥♥



~

Author notes

I chose to be inspired by 2 of your options

[Word Banks - must use as given, you may use more than 1 list but use all the words in each list]
18. Pearls, Nevermore, Cajole, Sunset, Taste, Fluid, Breathe

and the title
4. Liquid Memory

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  • Errant Panther
    January 25

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    lovely combination of prompts and the word bank is slipped into the poem so effortlessly it can easily be overlooked. I love the passion in the lines "breathe me in, this sweet seduction" great word play.


  • Fug-azi
    January 15
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    Excellent


  • kaibab silver member
    January 15

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    Sigh is deeper flow of water,
    the wet embrace of every pore
    when arms are whispers on the shore
    and sand writes love in rolling thunder

    so lovely angel-poet