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Simply, as a child yearns for comfort,
I wallow in the embers of last night.
A warm euphoria wraps its arms
around me and holds fast the tendrils
of satiation left in your absence.

A cry, a thorn, pierces the quiet
driving the ambiance into the corners;
A sketch of peace, distorted by
the exhibition of off-handed romance
floods my mind and causes pain.

If stared at long enough,
the peripheral thoughts permeating
the event melt like moths in the daylight,
becoming a canvas left in the gutter.
All things are relative.

And so, I stand the guardian
of those invisible to love.
As I yawn a prayer of cessation,
falling sands emulate an opiate
that will never satisfy.


©2009
1-16-09


Author notes

Written for the contest: Contest Prompt: Word Bank by Todays Poem Box
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2433559



Word List:
embers, exhibition, ambiance, peripheral, child, thorn, sketch, hold fast, moth, guardian, canvas, yawn, prayer, sands, opiate.

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  • arnal
    July 18
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    Nice poetic words nice poetic thoughts,enjoyed


  • Todays Poem Box
    February 1

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    Excellent job with the word bank!
    15/15 words used.
    Great imagery. Excellent emotion.
    Thanks for entering and best of luck!
    Write on.
    ~*~


    • Elrenia
      February 1
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      Thank you for taking the time to comment. The word list was definitely a challenge.

      rous


  • ScarletO gold member
    January 17

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    Very smooth while using all the words in the bank. Good luck in the contest.