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new is old

bad as i can feel...
but not sure wat i feel

i have done wrong
wondering if it was the bad

but cant change the way i feel
only wat i see

pain is wat i should be feeling
she tries to help

but my heart feel so deep
like at the bottom of an ocean

how can this be
i was inlove

and now not at all

i want to be in love
and only for her

Author notes

i did something that later i will regret... and beg for forgiveness later... but im lost right now... and idk if i need help... and idk where i would go if i was found... im sorry

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  • Tadd
    January 20
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    well writen


  • dinn0011
    January 17
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    Heart break can be hard. I hope you are ok. It was well writen.


  • peregrin
    January 15

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    *hugs*
    Awe, what happened...?
    This write is full of emotion... fabulous!!!

    Talk to me anytime, alright?

    Gwen