intriguing phantoms
whisper
in quaint alleyways
dank with mystery
whilst ushering into a garden
where only my pen follows
unnoticed
Author notes
20 words - 20 WORDS on why you write poetry.
I write poetry to be a part of the big picture.
A contest entry
- Quickie - Lost & Found by Cannonsfire.
400 points, ended January 24, 2009, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
Comments
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This just goes to show that you don't need a massive piece in order to show emotion.
The imagery was dark and intense, and the words were perfectly chosen. The final word is a nice touch.
I highly enjoyed this and actually read it several times.
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I LOVE THIS! The images are so perfectly described~! You used my favorite words!
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This is quite lovely, the images I get are soft and textured. Loved it
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