my life has changed greatly
i know have a 3 month old baby who loves me
my life revoles around him now
no matter what happens i will have my lil boy
i have a better view on life since i gave birth to him
he has made me relize how much i have to live for
no matter how much i get deppressed he can make me smile
plus i have a great man in my life right now
he supports me and loves me and the baby
thats all i need right now till i can find a job
i love him and my baby oh so much
if something was too happen to them i would die of heart break
A contest entry
- write. by chloris.
400 points, ended January 20, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I think this is well done, but, and this is just a personal thing, if you played around with the grammar and punctuation it might flow easier. I like the idea and this is well written. Good job. -Des
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Universal truth... Mothers are Mothers... everyone feels the same... as long as we are wives, our world is our other halves..once we beget a child, s/he dominates in everything and everywhere... True and reality indeed... being a mother-to-be, i started feeling that my child is gonna be everthing in this world to me... My hubby thinks in the same way....
Good write... all the best in the contest
Love and regards
Kiddy
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