I fall in ocean waves
And lay them on my withered face
I watch the silhouetted stars
And the moon’s stolen light
Your timing is perfect
When your beauty crosses my mind
I want you through my circuitry
You’ve made me fly
You’ve made me fly
We’ll blanket the fields
With your favorite violets and forget-me-nots
I want to taste your warmth
When we synchronize together
Your timing is perfect
When your beauty crosses my mind
I want you through my circuitry
You’ve made me fly
You’ve made me fly
I’m curious to know
How you feel when its 2 AM
And you’re still holding on to me.
We’ll lick the sapphire sky clean
And watch it turn from blue to green.
We'll candle the light to drench your body
So we can explore through the moon shadows in your eyes
We'll kiss necks to make our goosebumps arise.
Your timing is perfect
When your beauty crosses my mind
I want you through my circuitry
You’ve made me fly
You’ve made me fly
Author notes
I wrote this towards a special person who makes me feel comfortable no matter what. I could be in their hold forever. Enjoy.
A contest entry
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Questions, Comments, Concerns?
Comments
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i cant help but feeling that this is a typical love poem, i think maybe you could have been a bit more creative. thank you for entering and good luck
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For a love poem, this was well written. I loved the background, I think it emphasized the words you chose to use. I liked this piece, and wish you the best of luck in my contest.
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Thank you so much.
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Are these lyrics? It's just they're in the correct format for them. Either way it'd be intersting to hear them to a tune.
The originality in your descriptions throughout is beautiful.
These lines "We’ll lick the sapphire sky clean
And watch it turn from blue to green.
I want the candle light to drench your body" are my favourite, I just paused at that part and read them over a few times.
Thanks for entering.
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