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Leaf 14


Leaf,

you giddy-making brat,

you have me helter-skeltering

with you

to look into blue pools,

sip waters from the lip of a lake.

 

Stay; fall into my hand

and let me read you

with my mouth and tongue,

the bitter lines of your history,

the sgeulachd of your branch-home,

the longing of your limbs,

your roots-in-earth,

your rank upon rank of sister-trees,

the blueprint of the softwood

and broadleaf,

the clattering wind

in rook-abandoned heights,

the kiss of moss at the subtle cleft.

 

So much from

a single, lay-me-down leaf,

one moment borne up,

the next delve-drifted

past my fingers too fast, too fast!

 

So much there is in the way of you,

your bearing on the air,

your beating in my hand

like the heart of a finch,

your strangeness against my cheek –

 

enough,

let me be buried under you

and your kind, to lie,

to listen to the growing,

gathering silence.

 

 

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  • hawkeslake gold member
    February 22, 2009

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    The sheer sensuality of this is breath-taking; all the emotions fluttering down to the last peaceful stanza...let me be buried under you...to listen to the growing gathering silence... how strange and beautiful to think of this.


  • Gagiikwe
    January 31, 2009

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    playful dervish in the air

    This now the 14th in this list I've read this fortnight; and by far the best.
    A lovely blend of sprite and discovery, with the sadness at the end.
    Stays true to your leaf with memoried histories theme.
    Now, tell me, was it really the leaf that was the brat?


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      February 1, 2009
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      Yep, absolutely the leaf was the brat - you'd have to know the dedicatee, who is rather special. I had never written her a poem before, and she deserved one, and it fitted right in with this theme.


  • deercatcher
    January 24, 2009

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    Sister trees. I was introduced to the 3 tree concept; Tree 1 is stem, roots, branches and leaves where the wood is vascularly active or reactive. Easily recognized as a young tree. Tree 2 is that traditional tree, with a trunk or trunks made largely of deactivated or unresponsive heartwood, covered in reactive wood; with Tree 1's (or branches) arranged on the trunk. Tree 3 is the entity of all neighbouring same specie trees connected by site conditions, weather, and root grafts. there is communication between unlinked trees as well in pheremones released to the breeze that brings responses in the 'listening' trees...


  • tara wilson gold member
    January 23, 2009

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    this is so amazing, what a very beautiful poem. enjoyed


  • Lady Michaella
    January 23, 2009

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    a reallly well done poem here. i really enjoyed reading it
    it had some really interesting stuff in it, which made it even more enjoyable for me. i like the form you used
    well done,
    it was a great write and read.
    x

  • silverfish
    January 23, 2009

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    after so many leaves in this series, i believe you have the makings of your own tree. this poem is so good, so very very good, you have turned a fish to wood. oh my. -branchfish


  • cricketjeff gold member
    January 16, 2009
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  • nutmegg
    January 15, 2009
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    "heart of a finch" ---> jesus, my heart skipped there. im not sure why, but this affected me a lot.


  • notorious gold member
    January 15, 2009
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    "lip of a lake." Hot damnnn

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