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Hearts Do Scream

Theirs was a love affair
i watched from a distance
like a drive in movie
and it erupted
i sighed for an instant
i bled the moment
cool beside me, lie the reasons
cool beside me and hide
Theirs was a love affair
i watched from a distance
safe so far away
tears across the screen
i'm hardly breathing
loose the lust for blood
two hearts do scream
and
cool beside me
and lie the reasons
cool beside me
and hide....

hmmmm?

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  • RX-Queen
    September 21

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    I like the feelings all of your poetry seems to create. The ending of this was a little awkward but there are two parts of this that really stand out and make me want to read more, first " I sighed for an instant, I bled the moment " it's almost like I have felt this way before yet I cannot recall it. Secondly " Tears across the screen, I'm hardly breathing" Not sure the reason for it. Anyways well done and as always, I enjoyed the read.