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Time Died (haiku)



  time died, yesterday;
and now I'll live forever,
    ever, and ever




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  • bigperm
    January 22, 2009

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    beautiful Carrie

    He felt that his whole life was some kind of dream and he sometimes wondered whose it was and whether they were enjoying it.
    Douglas Adams (1952 - 2001), "The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy"

  • dx d by me
    January 16, 2009

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    This is a lovely piece. There seems to be, as I read it, a depth of sadness about it. I'm sure it could be interpreted as elation as well by somone. It must be the night...Very effective writing to be able to have the duel possibilities. Geo


    • McRae by nature
      January 16, 2009
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      You read it correctly. It was definitely written in a saddened state of mind. Thank you so much for reading my work.

      Carrie