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Each Time.

Each time I kiss the memory..

bitterness stains my lips.






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I have this line, and you need to finish it,

I hope you meant just finish the line ?

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    January 16, 2009
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    Oh wow what an excellent and sad ending to this line.
    Best wishes in the contest.
    Gaylene


  • StarEyes
    January 15, 2009

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    WOW! What a take on the prompt! This is great!
    I like where you went with this one!

    Thanks for the entry!

    Best of luck in this contest!