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Memory

Each time I kiss the memory
brings you closer back to me.
Lets me know you’re still there
when tears blind my eyes to see.

Through the rain I feel your kiss
and the breeze carries your caress.
White rose petals on the ground
are my angel’s wedding dress.

So let me kiss the memory
And your love will set me free.

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  • Glasyalabolas
    April 1

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    Very soft, gentle, caring, short though in this small selection of words there is so much loving emotion that it doesn't need any more words to say it.

    Good write.


  • LadyDementia gold member
    January 17

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    Congrats on the silver!

    Beautiful imagery and emotions portrayed here, has such a calming effect when you read it. Superbly penned, good luck in the contest hun


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 16

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    Congrats on the Silver ~

    This is so beautiful, not only the poem but the background
    The love you've expressed is touching, sweet and soo romantic !

    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Desire gold member
    January 16

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    Beautiful~

    Oh My this tugs at the Heartstrings and Love the tight rhyme also message penned
    Adore the words: white rose petals and reference to wedding dress
    Emotions grab hard~
    Images tug at Spirit~ Bravo!!
    Excellent this is

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    January 15

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    Aww, thats beautiful, Doll...

    Soft, tender & heartfelt...
    Pretty narrative with a sweet rhyme scheme & a cute BG...
    Another great piece...
    Good luck in your contest...
    Well done!!!


  • StarEyes
    January 15

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    Ohhhhhh, *sigh* I think my heart just melted here! Wow! What a wonderful read! This is truly beautiful! Something in this one is just touching me deeply... Great job!

    Thanks for your entry.

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Lanasaur
    January 15

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    awww

    a sweet peice i like the flow of your poem and the best of luck in your contest

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