Finding you, but losing me
night after night in your arms
gaining wisdom,but losing strength
ears up in alarm.
Summer air leaves her scent
of memories from before
Autumn days have come and went
Winter lies in store.
You are my lovely Annabel Lee
chilled by the sea`s wind
I`m so glad you have come to me
this can not be a sin.
Cold and dark yet warm and bright
I look into your eyes
Can we go away tonight
and hide from all their lies?
A contest entry
- Phrase Prompt by piccola.
900 points, ended January 17, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a good poem, soft and inviting, ah poem, i have a poem posted called the wind's breath finds a face, very poe like.
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Beautiful poem. I love the stlye. I am curious about the ending though, and what exactly you mean by "hide from all their lies?" but other than that I really like it. Keep up the awesome writes.
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i really love this poem....
great flow ,nice rhyme .....very sweet and romantic...keep it up ..
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Cold and dark yet warm and bright
I look into your eyes
Can we go away tonight
and hide from all their lies?
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due to such Thoughts in your poetry, you were always my favorite.. wow, you have started to write better than ever before.
this one was so touching
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The poet of hearts and beautiful words
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good job with the prompt and thank you very much for entering.
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edgar allen poe?
this really nice..good write!
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